This is the second version of the animatic. Once again, I have used the storyboards from the previous animatic, but with the added inbetweens and the changes involving the friend of the hero coming in give him the encouragement he needs. The most important improvement here is that the good memory of the hero and his teammates/friends is given a trigger, and is now less sporadic. The timing also works again, but some of the shots hold a little too long, such as the memory of the friends. The second character also works in my opinion as the two characters are very contrasting, both in costume design and size. What I think needs to be thought about now is the distinction between memory and imagination in the visions, as it still isn't very clear whether or not the visions actually happened. I will also need think about the designs of the other characters.

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